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作文题目:
  Would the range of technology available of individuals increasethe gap of rich and poor? Discuss.
  范文:
  Presently, many would vaunt the gap between the rich and poor,attributing such a gap to the thriving of modern technology.Butsome others would disputethis view. What lies between sucharguments is the definition of the word"gap",the cons and proswould argue from their points of view as follows:
  The pros for such an idea come up with many examples , rangingfrom the internet stock exchange and mobile communication, theybelieve such methods of technology have broadenthe gap between thebetter-off and the poorer because they can add much faster to thewealthier's fortune and less to the poor's wallets.Examples oftrillionaires are various from Bill Gates to some famous websiteowners, who are mostly related to the development of internet orcommunication. In this sense, the gap between them and the rest isincreasing.
  The cons stand still to their definition of "gap". The gap ofliving standard between the poor and the rich is actuallydecreasing for the improvement of technology. In the past ,carowners are very much like showing off their status and wealth, thecase was quite similar to the first generation of mobile phoneowners.But when technology has overwhelmed such gap, we can see howpopular cars and mobile phones are, they are no longer anysymbolsof status. Another example is from the way that peopletravel, we used to take a train, but presently most people wouldprefer to take a flight if the destination is quite far away.Suchgap between the rich and poor is not as obvious as before.
  As my conclusion, I would say that such a dispute can reach noresult due to the vagueness of topic, IELTS had better give somemore clarifiedor common-based argument to share.


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